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This is no beekeeper.
My main issue with this is the sound design was weak and the action just lacked kinetic energy. It tried to kind of do the nightclub scene from collateral, but just wasn't up to it.
I'd say the biggest miss here is that no one acted as the straight man in our two main character's relationship. It might have been slightly more interesting if the young girl gets to act as a proxy for the audience, commenting on the insanity of the situation or the violence, but she is just oddly quite when not being addressed.